Feeling that she has finally accomplished something that her professor
will like, Sally finished it off with a conclusion:
dates. Group Y women in the same categoryhad clearer skin and taller boyfriends. (34)
Different people respond to the same situation in
many different ways. The example of the people of Ethnic Group Y shows that, from one perspective, the "terrible problem of X" may not be so terrible after all. (15) Perhaps
the real problem lies not in Situation X, but rather in the way that we look at X. (16) We should all listen to the voices of people like the members of Group Y, (17) who feel that scientific research ignores special cultural considerations that may affect how a group of people
responds to a particular situation.
(15) This would not be a bad thesis statement.
(16) This is s a rather trite and cheesy conclusion.. This is preachy. A laudable opinion, but you can come up with an argument.
(17) People like
group Y? You allude to other groups, but you do not mention
Now the only thing left to do was write the bibliography.
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