August 26, 2010 Archives

• In order to help you with the writing assignment that is also due today, and to prepare you to participate in the class discussion we will have today, read chapters 1-2 in SF Writer before you come to class.
  

This assignment is a practice exercise, designed to make sure that you know how to find, complete, and submit a paragraph assignment. You'll also get a chance to see how I will evaluate your work (even though I won't record this grade -- it's just for your benefit).

• Length: 200 words (not counting the title block)
  
• Format:
  
• One paragraph (with a topic sentence, supporting sentences, and a conclusion that does more than just summarize/repeat)
• MLA Style (see the model in section 27c of the SF Writer; or, download this word processor file: MLA Template.doc and use it to format all your papers in this class.
• Topic: What is it like to be part of an iPad campus? (There is no "right" or "wrong" answer.)
  
• Focus: Develop a single idea in depth, rather than a list of loosely-related ideas.
• Point value: None. (This is purely for practice.)
• Submit: upload to turnitin.com. You will need to register for a (free) account, and sign in to our class, using the following course ID and password:
• Course ID: 3420045
• Password "rewriting"
  
• Due: 11am, Thursday, 26 Aug.

Evaluation Rubric

100	Excellent	Good	Acceptable	Attempted	Unacceptable
	20	18.5	15	12	8
Length	Within 5%	Within 10%	Within 15%	Within 25%	25-50%
MLA format	Perfect MLA style headings and layout	MLA headings, with trivial layout lapses	Mostly follows MLA layout and headings	Some attempt at MLA layout and headings	MLA formatting not present
Punctuation & Words	Perfect	Minor issues don't impact main ideas	Some errors, ideas mostly unaffected	Some accuracy at the punct & word level	Significant errors damage flow of ideas
Phrases & Sentences	Perfect	A few minor issues, but all ideas are clear	Some errors, but ideas are mostly clear	Some attempt at accuracy in sentence phrasing	Significant errors damage flow of ideas
Focus	A single idea, with apt details that offer depth	A single idea,  explored with relevant detail	A single idea,  connected to useful detail	Some attempt to relate detail to main idea	Several ideas compete for central focus

"Can You Just Tell Us What You Want?"
Okay.  I want...

• you to dive in, sleeves rolled up and eyes open. Writing is not like arithmetic or spelling, where you can stop once you've found "the right answer."  Every thing that has been written, and every person who writes, can improve.
  
• you to take your first step towards reaching your true potential, not just as a writer, but as a thinker, a problem-solver, and the future of our civilization.
  
• you to understand I'm not looking for a specific answer, or any specific approach.
  
• you to use any tone you want -- funny or fearful; factual or philosophical.
• you to be honest. You won't get more points for expressing an opinion that I happen to hold, or fewer points for disagreeing with me.
  
• you not to waste words. (Don't repeat the question, as in "If I had to describe what it was like to be on an an iPad campus, I would have to say..."  The paragraph you submit should just dive into the answer.)
• you to write a single, 200-word paragraph (not a 3-page essay, and not a list of bullet points).
  
• As you can see from the rubric, writing anywhere from 170 to 230 words is considered "Acceptable."
• Don't pad. You'll get a much better grade if you first write more than 200 words, and then trim the excess words, to fit your ideas into a tighter package.