September 13, 2010 Archives

Due Today:

Ex 2 (editors)

Setonian Layout Instructions I (usability report and screencast)
Due Today:

Ex 2 (first-timers)

Peer Interview. (A 400-word news feature, in which you profile another first-timer. Include quotes from at least 3 sources -- your subject and two other people who have known your peer for a long time -- not just since August.)

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For your rough draft, I'll give you feedback according to this rubric.

Content (30)


Excellent
6
Good
5
Acceptable
4
Attempted
3
Unacceptable
1

Length

Within 2%
Within 5%
Within 10%
Within 25%
Not w/i 25%

Headline



Attracts w/ well-chosen
words
Informs w/
effective
words
Uses at least 1 effective, non-passive verb
Uses at least 1
relevant
verb
Omits a relevant verb

Lead

Grabs & informs
w/ style & brevity
Informs w/o wasted words
Important details in brief, useful order
Some attempt at a news feature lead
No clear lead; may echo essay or TV


Paragraphs

1 idea or speaker each; 2-3 short sentences

Mostly 1 idea each; short sentences
Good focus, w/ few or no length issues
Organized but essay-style; need trimming
Focus and length need additional work.

Sources (Interviews)


4+ good sources
3 good sources
2 good sources
1 source
0 sources

AP Style (10)

Excellent
10
Good
8
Acceptable
7
Attempted
6
Unacceptable
4

(I realize we have not gone over this in depth. Consider this a diagnostic.)
Perfect
Few, trivial lapses
Mostly correct
Some attempt at AP Style
Significant AP Style lapses








Again, if you have not taken EL200 before, you will always read and reflect about Haiman. If you are a Setonian editor, you will skim Haiman, but read and write about how Coffey illuminates an issue Haiman covers.
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