Student Presentations

I would love some feedback on my presentation if possible. Thanks!
http://blogs.setonhill.edu/ElizabethSwartzwelder/2010/01/historical_video_games_are_mor.html

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R79XiU_vY2w

Please comment on my presentation if you would like. I have enjoyed working on it, and I am glad that I took this class. I look forward to viewing everyone's presentations.
http://blogs.setonhill.edu/SusanCarmichael/2010/01/student_presentation_the_devol.html

http://blogs.setonhill.edu/JeremyBarrick/2010/01/el_250_student_presentations.html

http://blogs.setonhill.edu/KeithCampbell/2010/01/farmville.html