September 2, 2009 Archives
Intensifiers
If you feel that your reference to "a big dog" doesn't do the dog justice, instead of writing "a [very big / damn huge / friggen humongous] dog," a good journalist will ask questions so that the passage will read "130-pound Rottweiler named Bruiser."
If calling something "a disappointment" doesn't do it justice, calling it "a big disappointment" or "a very big disappointment"
or "a colossal disappointment" will be no better. Express intensity in
more direct, context-sensitive ways. A fourth-quarter loss might be "a
crushing disappointment," while an uninteresting movie might be "a
mind-numbing disappointment." Instead of "a big X" or "a very big X,"
consider "a crippling blow," "an unwieldy overcoat," or "a generous pie
slice."
Sources
A news article (hard or soft) should have at least three sources,
and should mention each source at least once in the first half of the
story.
Don't leave "the opposing view" until the last paragraph, because an editor will expect to be able to chop off the bottom of your story to fit it in on the page.
A movie or restaurant review is based mostly on the author's direct observations of the subject, and thus might not include any additional sources.
Clark & Scalon 164-174
English Essay vs. News Story
English Essay |
News Story |
Usually, the
instructor knows more about the
subject than the student-author. |
Usually, the reporter knows more about the subject than the general reader. |
Essays for Your Instructor
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Journalism for the General Public
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Personal Perspective
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Objective Perspective
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