dates. Group Y women in the same category had clearer skin and taller boyfriends. (34)      Different people respond to the same situation in many different ways. The example of the people of Ethnic Group Y shows that, from one perspective, the "terrible problem of X" may not be so terrible after all. (15) Perhaps the real problem lies not in Situation X, but rather in the way that we look at X. (16) We should all listen to the voices of people like the members of Group Y, (17) who feel that scientific research ignores special cultural considerations that may affect how a group of people responds to a particular situation. (15) This would not be a bad thesis statement. (16) This is s a rather trite and cheesy conclusion.. This is preachy.  A laudable opinion, but you can come up with an argument. (17) People like group Y? You allude to other groups, but you do not mention them.   Frankly, you barely mention group Y either.