Just as I spent the afternoon of 9/11/2001 making a web page, because it helped occupy my mind, I’m spending a few minutes while my daughter is otherwise occupied, observing the phrasing of the WTAE-TV news article:
A Seton Hill University student is dead following a police investigation off campus in Greensburg early Sunday morning.
The word “following” simply means “comes after,” but journalists often use it as a euphemism for “because of” in situations when there aren’t enough confirmed facts.
I realize that, at the moment, the police probably haven’t released full details about how the student died — maybe it was self-inflicted, maybe he jumped out a window. The headline refers to “incident” — which is generic enough. But the lead refers to “investigation” — and that’s usually what TV reporters do, make the “investigation” the center of the story, when the story itself is old.
But this isn’t an old story yet — it’s still breaking news. I believe a press conference is going on right now… I e-mailed the editor of the student paper a few hours ago… I hope they got someone on the story right away.
For homework that’s due Tuesday, students in my journalism class were supposed to look at some examples of online journalism. Here’s a very simple slide show about the off-campus shooting incident.
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The choreographer daughter is doing a thing.
No interior yet. Getting there. Gotta start somewhere. Low-poly background detail for a medieval theater…
This is manageable. Far better than some semesters.
Creating textures for background buildings in a medieval theater simulation project. I can always improve…
Nothing in this stack is pressing, but they do include rough drafts of final papers,…