Writing a Cutline (Caption) for the News: Three examples of an often overlooked journalism skill
In journalism, the “cutline” is the text below a picture, explaining what the reader is looking at. It’s what most people call a caption, but to a journalist, a “caption” is more like a title that appears above the photo, while the “cutline” is a few lines of text under the photo.
An AP style caption is usually two sentences, with the first answering the question “What, exactly am I looking at?” (with names of the one or two most important people in the photo, the location / event, and date) and the second answering the question “Why is that newsworthy?” Space is limited; brevity is golden.
![](data:image/svg+xml;charset=utf-8,<svg height="270px" width="274px" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" version="1.1"/>)
Here, we see a dry, pointless cutline that offers nothing at all that the reader can’t gather from the picture. Yes, I can see the guy is gesturing. Snooze!
![](data:image/svg+xml;charset=utf-8,<svg height="289px" width="300px" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" version="1.1"/>)
![](data:image/svg+xml;charset=utf-8,<svg height="300px" width="184px" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2000/svg" version="1.1"/>)
A much more effective cutline builds on the photo to draws the reader into the story.
I found these great cutline examples on ibiblio.
Update, 10 May 2023
Links to ibiblio now come up as “403 Forbidden.
Added link to Janet Walsh’s description of AP photo captions.
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Great insights on the often-overlooked art of writing cutlines, Dennis! It’s fascinating how a well-crafted cutline can transform a photo from mere decoration to a key part of the storytelling process. I appreciate your emphasis on brevity and newsworthiness—it's such an essential skill in journalism. The examples you provided really illustrate the difference between a bland cutline and one that adds real value. I’ll definitely be more mindful of my cutlines from now on!
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