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![If your writing teacher lets you revise your first draft, don' t just submit a cleaner, less-beat-up version. Instead, take it apart, hold each piece in your hand, and make your second draft a pink monster truck, a time-traveling DeLorean, or a solar-powered jetpack. That's revision.](https://i0.wp.com/jerz.setonhill.edu/wp-content/uploads/2011/10/Revision-300x300.png?resize=400%2C399)
If your writing teacher lets you revise your first draft, don’t just submit a cleaner, less-beat-up version of the same old sedan. Instead, take it apart, hold each piece in your hand, and make your second draft a pink monster truck, a time-traveling DeLorean, or a solar-powered jetpack. That’s revision.
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