Draft: “As my classmates tormented, I shrank into my turtle-like shell.”
Suggestion: “The school mocked; I turtled.”
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RT @DennisJerz: Draft: “As my classmates tormented, I shrank into my turtle-like shell.” Suggestion: “The school mocked; I turtled.” (Yes, …